I agree.
Definitely not about embellishing what grin.ninja already wrote, but perhaps cutting down on headline or sub-headers/sub-copy in some places, etc. to clean it up. For example (see below). I’ll give it a shot and see where I end up.
What’s Grin?
Grin builds electronic transactions for all, without censorship or restrictions.
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What’s Grin?
Electronic transactions for all. Without censorship or restrictions.