The design was charming, and it shows you put a serious effort into it! Well done for making it! I had some ideas about filling those Lorem Ipsum parts and adding some extra content in some parts:
Slide 2: Mentioning parts of monetary policy can fill 6th Lorem Ipsum.
Slide 4: Possibility of adding lightning network, layer 2 scaling for more transaction can be added in Lorem Ipsum.
Slide 6: Text under #Launch seems to be not updated. It can tell much about grin’s last HF in 2021 and the open road of next updates.
Slide 6: I also like mentioning somehow the story of leaving Igno from the project, “I am Ignotus” story and the reply in here:
Stories form a fundamental view of a project, and using the potential of them is necessary to attract newcomers.
Also slide 6: I very liked the background photo of Igno! 